lonely smoker j.

lonely-smoker-j
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its not finished yet, but hopefully i can fill it in later, im a charcoal pencil guy, so i like this look, but im going to try and learn how to fill it in...
Flash Draw   Created Apr 30, 2007   470 x 338px    Unless noted Copyright 2007 zuke83.

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tbbird  Jun 26, 2007

I give it a '10' as is. the drawing fits the title with the way the composition is set up. That said, if it was my drawing, I might try two things,

tbbird  Jun 26, 2007

first, to experiment with the positive and negative space around the mouth, very flat right now, (though that is interesting. . )

tbbird  Jun 26, 2007

and second, maybe adding some brownish red tones to the jacket, give it a conte sort of feel. . .

tbbird  Jun 26, 2007

but I am afraid to critique because your technique is years ahead of mine. (no joke, you have talent).

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