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Looks really bad. Was supposed to be me... but it kinda looks plasticy. :/ Anyway 1st portrait attempt. Please let me know what you think and critiques are most welcome. Also just so you know, the shoulders were meant to be uneven.
Flash Draw   Created Aug 06, 2009   470 x 338px    Unless noted Copyright 2009 *Happini*Doodle*.

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xBlackSealx  Dec 24, 2009

dis is really good. :DD

SoSweetItsScary  Oct 26, 2009

:D The only tip I could give is make the highlights go with the natural curve of the hair 8D

guitarpunk  Oct 17, 2009

Nice, good job. Critique:blend in the lightest part of the skin more into the darker parts. The eyes could be different shades of blue and I would draw the eyesbrows with the fill tool so it looks more realistic,not just one long line.

SoSweetItsScary  Oct 15, 2009

Ahhhh i already commented on this but i just love this *0* -fave-

Kouri_boy  Oct 04, 2009

u r talented yay, congrats :3 5/5

Monsoon_Girl  Oct 04, 2009

Award: Skillful draw. Liked: The effort. This does look nice.. Tips: use a lower transperency to stop the shiny. Use some pencil tool too for hair. Use the blue color first, then do lighter and darker lines thru it, then black circul, then two white skwares.

Chupuchup  Sep 27, 2009

LOL U REMIND ME OF MY OLD TEACHER XD 5h pretty :3

Golden Rose  Sep 13, 2009

Wow.

SoSweetItsScary  Sep 11, 2009

Gahhhhhhhh! THis looks exactly like me!!! Whoahhh, i have navy blue eyes, AND light brown hair with blonde highlights. :O

j fly85  Aug 18, 2009

Award: So much effort. Liked: i like the hair execellent job on that. Tips: hm well the eyes are kinda off smooth the skin out and more detail in the clothesthe lips are also inn a awkward position very good on the shines though

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