first drawing- feedback NEEDED

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In terms of how blended it is, should I blend a little less next time and leave some definition? I need some help, yo! I guess it's just a plain ol' wave. There's not much to it, I mostly just wanted to test out the platform.
Flash Draw   Created Nov 11, 2017   640 x 460px    Unless noted Copyright 2017 bellabirb3.

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second draw- FEEDBACK NEEDED

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nirvanaspirit666  Mar 04, 2018

It's a very nice drawing. what I would do is make it seem more "fluid" because to me it looks like a play-doh sculpture of water in a static state. however, it is a good drawing with great blending throughout. also add a sky :)

theplatespacenow  Nov 13, 2017

great first draw, welcome to RMD. I usually set my base color for a wave, im talking about the sky. then using light colors of preferred colors for waves. easier for me to show i will post a simple wave to show you

theplatespacenow replied:  Nov 13, 2017

have fun canvas draw has a lot of tools

bellabirb3 replied:  Nov 13, 2017

Thank you! I'll watch it whenever it's up

kawaiikid  Nov 11, 2017

its pretty good for a first drawing/ test. i do like how smooth the wave looks but it is lacking something; maybe make the foam more defined & add more shading/ details

bellabirb3 replied:  Nov 11, 2017

I'll keep that in mind, thanks!

STREETLEVEL replied:  Nov 12, 2017

You might also try layering a little more variance of color so that it looks more dimensional. I agree too that adding a little foam (doesnt have to be white..the ocean produces a greenish brown color too..) would add more definition Good Start!

bellabirb3 replied:  Nov 12, 2017

Awesome, thank you! I didn't expect to get any feedback, but I'll explore that in my next attempt!

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